Comments:

lainy - 2004-05-12 19:35:03
well i read some of your poems there pretty good if you keep writing im sure they could improve i find yuo have a good talent but i do have a word of advice try to steer clear of the short sentences in parentheses and get more rithym. but all in all pretty good!
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JS - 2004-08-04 11:54:24
Hm your poems aren't bad at all, some are pretty interesting. They give me some insight and idea.... I'll show you my poems next time.
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Carrie - 2005-02-23 08:05:07
I actually enjoyed a number of your poems. And the weird part is - as "bad" as they are, there were some that DID make me feel emotion and relate to the situation. Does that mean i'm still just a stupid girl stuck in high school mode? Geez, i thought i got over that 6 years ago...!
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